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My fears

I try to find the words
That seem to escape my brain
Tell her that I care for her
I don't want to see her go through any pain
Afriad of saying anything
Fear overcomes sensability's
That never ending fear thats part of me
Words become lodged, trapped in my throat
I just can't seem to get them out
Wishing I knew what to say
Wishing I knew if she felt the same
Last risk I took It happened to be
I blew my chance
I won't repeat my past mistakes
I want her to be happy
I want her to smile
I want to be the cause
Of her laughter
The tears of joy she has
If only I could say the words
Without this fear I have

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  • NickelleteXninja
    June 24, 2008

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    I think

    Your getting a lot better with each poem

    its amazing.

    Everytime I read one I am more proud to call you my hubby lol


    great write hun
    you have an amazing talent


  • Zixaphir
    June 23, 2008

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    Sorry about my outburst earlier... x.x
    Great poem, I hope the person you wrote it for can see your genius and devotion in it. Great write and keep making poetry. Peace!


  • wastedbby
    June 23, 2008

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    well this was a great poem. i think it is amazing how someone can care for another so much! and you know its not all that hard to let someone know how you feel, i mean whats ment to be will be you know but i wish you the best keep up your skills!