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Just No! (song)

Once upon a time
I had this crazy dream
I thought that maybe you and me
We could finally be...

But No!
Nothings ever that easy
No!
It can't be that way
Just No!
I have to work my hardest just to get to you

I'll the climb the highest mountains
I'll swim the deepest seas
I'll cross that raging river
Just to see your face...

'Cause No!
Nothings ever that easy
No!
It has to be so hard
Just No!
I have to kill myself just to get to you

No matter when or where
I'll finally get there
Nothing will ever stop me
From crawling back to you...

And No!
Nothings ever that easy
No!
It has to break your heart
Just No!
I have to sell my soul just to get to you

And when I get there
Right back in your arms
You push me away
And I'm right back at the start...

'Cause No!
Nothings ever that easy
No!
It can't be that way
Just No!
I know now that I'll never be with you

JUST NO!

Author notes

um this is a song that i wrote while i was really bored
so if anyone likes it just tell me =)) and if you dont like it, tell me that too haha Actually this is for my best friend/ ex boyfriend. i'll do anything to just be with him no matter how many times he tries to push me away. i'll settle with just being his friend if thats all he wants..

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  • MuteForNow
    January 13
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    It's good and I understand the emotion behind it completely.


  • Deadmans Heart
    August 9, 2008

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    find someone to out this to music

    You have the basis for a great hometown original song, so find a garage band or someone u know that can put this to music and provide vocals....who knows u might just like the end result


    • BeautifulNitemare
      August 11, 2008
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      thanks a lot i don't know anyone though except myself lol I play keyboard and guitar. im also not half bad at singing. so maybe ill record it and send it out to a well-known band or something. thanks for the suggestion!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 26, 2008
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    Aww..This is in a way sad. But its very well written and i liked it alot. i like it how you say "cause NO!". I could feel all the different emotions as i read. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck