The muted silence of the neverending nightmare,
Dreams decimated as the wrong ones come true,
Running from seekers not visible to anyone,
Hunting the final hours that I deserve,
Grabbed from behind and muted once again,
I struggle forth through the tangle of a spaghetti grip,
Once again I become the broken, silenced angel.
Author notes
Picture Credit: You've Got The Fear - chix0r
A contest entry
- :::Dive into a picture and paint its heart in pale words::: by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
1000 points, ended July 20, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a powerful write this weritten with short and stunning words. i love the way it brings the picture alive, the picture was the hostage section but in some ways we are a hostage to ourself as well. a powerful write well done. you are being marked out of 10
Cinfullydelicious- 10/10
Me- 8/10 -
I really liked this.
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Short, strong and stunning. Quite a write this, wonderfully penned. Good luck in the contest with it
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Wow darl this is some strong words..come through so well, very dark and suited to the pic, love the tangle of spaghetti grip
Good luck
Cin
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Short but with very strong words honey. You wrote wonderfully to the picture.
Best of luck in the contest.
Love and hugs
Mummy
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This is ratrher dark and makes me feel uneasy sigh but goodlukc in the contest best wishes and much love always
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ooh wow this is very very powerful hun,
i love this poem, its very raw with emotion and feeling,
your wording is just marvellous hehe i still need to finish my poem for this contest, hmm
always here for you hun,
love kitty xxx -
this is quite powerful! i like it!...i hope you do good in the contest!
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