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Promise

Walking along the cold sandy beach,
Small raindrops falling all around.

A cold blade clutched tightly,
A hard decision awaiting.

He wasn't there.
He broke our promise.

A lone sole tear rolling down a pale cheek
A cold blade gliding across red skin.

This is better,
shameless.

Blood stained the smooth sand,
As she lay down to rest forever.

Author notes

This was actually the first poem I ever wrote... A year or two ago... It's changed a little bit, though, but just a little tiny bit!

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