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Did You Ever

Do you own a gun.
Then go shooting for fun.
How about when your in school.
Paper spit wads were pretty cool.
Throwing bricks off a bridge.
Then run like hell, before it hit’s a rig.
Swimming in a public pool.
Un rap some chocolate bars - they float like stools.
Ever kissed a girl on her lips.
She kicked me in the balls - then I did the splits.

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This poem was fun to write .. thanks
Your friend in poetry... JackReed3

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  • C.I.M.A Punk
    June 28, 2008

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    The last two lines really put a smile on my face.
    The playful flow added to the humor.
    Well done!


  • newnoakua
    June 25, 2008
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    cute, I like it!


    Last line made me chuckle too!