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[ Forgotten is she, ]

Forgotten is she,
behind a wall where she´s not seen.
I think to myself ¨how can this be?¨
that they won save her.
Millions of people beaten everyday,
and millions are also saved.
Or so they say.
So, why is she still there?
What if it happened to your friend?
Wouldn´t you want to save them?
What if it happened to you?
Would you want to be saved?

To many bruises.
So many tears.
Every time she looses.
So many more fears.
What do I do, what can I say?
How can I make the pain go away?
Not tomorrow, and not the next day.
Today.
How do I save her today?

I love this girl,
and I can´t do a thing for her.
Does that make me a failure?
Does that make me just as bad as the ones hitting her?
I dont know....
But does anybody care?

Millions of people saved from abusers every day.
Is it really saving them though?
How come they won´t come my way?
Why won´t they say my best friend?
What am I supposed to say?
How many more are like this?
How many more are ignored?
And how many more are dying?

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 23, 2008
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    this is a write that hits very close to home with me. i agree, if domestic violence does not end, we all will pay the price. there are a few typos in here that are easily fixed but do not reflect on the overall write. great job and i wish you well in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie