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Your Loss

You silly little thing
Why did you run away
Did you fear losing me?
And here we are today

But I will not worry
Or come running after you
For this little poem
Is about me, not you!

I am very caring
I love all this life, it's true
And for a tiny second
I tried loving you!

I work as hard as I can
To have a life fulfilled
I like to pay for everything
I even payed your bills!

I like to read, write and play
For fun is a must
I even found it wonderful
When I held your bust!

I drive a red Porsche Boxster
I like to give a thrill
But you were so sombre
It wasn't a good deal!

Well, farewell little honey
I wish you all the luck
Knowing I did nothing wrong
I am lovely and your loss!

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  • Heartless Angel
    June 24, 2008
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    wonderful. This is absolutely what I was looking for. Definately going to place.


    • ChrisE
      June 24, 2008
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      Thank you...

      Wow, gold! Thank you. I am pleased you liked my poem. I enjoyed writing for your competition very much. Thank you.