She wants the pain
the pain she lives for
the pain she breathes for
the pain she knows she'll die for
they see her hurt
they feel her suffer
they listen to her bleed
they try to stop the pain
she loves them for trying
she would never tell them to give up
but she knows they can never understand
they'll never feel the pain
never see how powerful it really is
there nothing against its power
they know whats best
they can see what she really wants
she knows there right
she wishes they could help
but only she has the power
but shes to weak to fight
she wants to stop the pain
but she dosnt know how
the pain is to strong
she can feel its effects washing over
her own control seeping away
she knows in the end the pain will win
the pain will always win
Author notes
This is another poem I wrote about cutting myself. It also reflects the way my friends feel about my cutting.
A contest entry
- Welcome to my nightmare [options] by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended June 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Depressed. by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great..
This poem is great. in my point of view nothing can make this poem beter. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly
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