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ten

Exhausted
Deserted
Exploited
Deflated
Empty
Depleted
Effeted
Deleted
Empty
Defeated

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random words kinda along the same thought pattern
this has an alternate title but if i say it i'll REALLY get in trouble so yeah

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  • sassykitty
    July 27, 2008

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    We all feel like this sometimes, and I liked the way you use this list poem to explain yourself. Not sure what effeted means though. Like the use of internal rhyme too, clever and thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing.


  • Lucian Valcor
    June 24, 2008
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    hmmmmm ?


    • AnonymousXO
      June 26, 2008
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      I really need a better title than "ten" for this
      It was just words. that didnt flow very well. Disjointed words. I wrote it a long time ago. Does it make any sense at all?