Thinking I could live without you
regret;
insane decision
You’re the addiction I must satisfy.
Author notes
15 words
Prompt ~ Make me want you
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie....come write for me... by Unsigned.
300 points, ended June 23, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I've had that kind of addiction before!! Gotta be better than some others right?
Cool poem sis!
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hehehe yes better then other addictions for sure lol
Thanks SiS
Cind
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sissy! lol.. you did a wonderful job!! I love the whole thing!!! I don't think I have a favorite line 
lol.. I'm very upset you didn't get anything for this! 
you did a great job with the prompt!!! 
Angel
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aww thanks SiSsy..im mad too hehehe, i tried very damn hard
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Ahhhh...those addictions...
Wonderful and powerful words here!
Love You~
Auntie
Az
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hehe yes 'those additcions'
Thanx Aunty Az
Cind
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This is such a great write and you have managed to say so much in so few words. Well done Cindy, and all the best for the contest.
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Love the prompt and the poem. It almost tells a whole story in the 15 words. Great ending line, too... loved that. Nice work.
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Your the addiction I must Satisfy...
WOW...I love it absolutely stunningly love it...I've been robbed of my ability to write a good review so my wittiness is gone...but here's my heart...I LOVE THAT LINE...that's what every love should be a beautiful addiction. Excellent! Keep it up, Peace n' Love, JT
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aw wow, a great comment, thank you
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this is so beautifully done for the prompt and it really does fit the picture.an amazing piece sis i hope everything is ok
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I am good at satisfaction...lol
Well done
SImon
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very nice take on the prompt
Ruby
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Wonderfully done.
Best of luck to you.
I hope it brings a smile to him.
Riftkin
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