Yellow Sun Oh so bright,
May we have a wish today?
I wish for you to say light
so I can play all night.
When midnight showed it self it ruin the fun
mom cried "come to bed and rest your head"
I cried in protest "Its Still daylight".
Oh Sun so bright
Your are that ball in the sky
some day I hope you come down and play with me,
I'm so alone down here my friend, Its getting so Bright now
OHH I SEE YOU YES Thank you Oh Sun for coming down to play with me.
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option One the sun
A contest entry
- Starting a PiF by peridotPixi.
300 points, ended June 23, 2008, 1 entries
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This is a wonderful poem, i love the feelings and the deep emoitons you have put into this poem, i guess not many people were insipired, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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