You people with your clicks, always giving me shit for being different
(I was just the same! You just didn't give me the time of day to find out!)
If only you understood the complete, and utter lack of rationality I have now
(I don't feel sorry for it, you gave me no choice.)
For those lost in the confusion, innocence hurt in my pain
(I am sorry for that, I promise no more pain.)
This agony caused inside of me, lonely feelings surrounding my very core
(I'm so desperate for help, craving someone's attention, someone's love.)
The deed is done, I've done the ultimate wrong
(I'm in a better place, somewhere where I'm loved.)
A contest entry
- Time for a Massacre by hobo-candy.
300 points, ended June 23, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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This one line really stood out to me.
(I'm so desperate for help, craving someone's attention, someone's love.)
This is truth and i challenge teens and adults alike to take the time to be kind to at least one person who feels this way. I went through abuse so i can relate, think i didnt want to harm ...well there were times i wanted to end it all, but it just made me stronger inside when i turned my life around by asking why they did what they did? I know now the reasons...not an excuse but they were the weak ones not me!
Goodluck,
~Lisa~
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ooo creepy and yet truthful i like it...its seems so realistic...very well written very good...adam
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very good write....hmmm..kepp up the good work
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