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our first kiss

Kissing you with all the intensity I have in me
The first kiss determines all
Comes natural, flows so well
Lips locked, pressed tight with love
Mind blowing passion
Talent is unneeded
The longing feeling adds fuel to our already ignited fire
Sighs of relief are let off as our lips touch
They touch and fail to part
Tears streaming down our faces- youre finally here!
Don’t want to let go…to end this amazing first kiss
Barely resting to breathe
We pull away slowly sucking up air, looking into each others eyes with love
I smile and let off a laugh as I wipe the tears from your face
Tell you I love you and that was amazing

Author notes

georgia you're my hero

xXcrazychristinaXx

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  • nevadapoet
    September 6, 2008

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    a strong powerful write with great flow and imagery. A perfect entry for the contest...thank you. The pleasure was all mine.
    Nevadapoet

  • strangerforeigner
    August 29, 2008

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    Ah, the first kiss. There is nothing like it. This is a really good write, I felt for a moment like I was kissing someone when I was reading it. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!

  • Frodofan
    July 27, 2008

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    Never really said it was the first kiss of a second love, so it doesn't exactly fit the theme...

    Nicely described however.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 8, 2008
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    Awww thi8s is so cute! Great work hun x are you a friend of Sammi?


  • honorable mention
    June 25, 2008
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    I remember my first kiss. It was nothing compared to this. Im jealous. lol


    • Lonely Christina
      June 25, 2008
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      well lol its not my first kiss ever its my 1st kiss with a certain person thanks!


  • XNevermindX
    June 23, 2008

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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm, i dont know what to say excpet....WOW, and I CAT WAIT, lol!!!

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