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Cosmic Industry

new lamps for old ones,
fashioned in the machine-shop
of God's factory

A contest entry

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  • waydownuponjoy
    June 24, 2008

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    Just love ...

    the imagery of your haiku and there's nothing to compare with those lights when one is able to escape the glare of the man-made ones! Nicely shared! joy


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    A very nice write, but you have a capital in the firs line that shouldn't be there, and a period at the end that shouldn't be there. Easily fixed. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    New lamps for the old! Sounds like here we go again! "Out with the old, in with the new!!" Great job penning this haiku!! ~Sie