Above the surface
everything seems so small
Deep below the cresting waters
is where the true existence lives
Beneath the surface our mortal shell
lies in our hidden depths
The true beauty
of our soul
Author notes
"Iceberg"
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Hidden Depths... by Nature Song.
575 points, ended June 30, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you so much for gold!!!!! -
first of all wow love the pic....!
second this poem....
and so do you...! i loved this.... really awesome poem here thanks for sharing and goood luck in contest if was in mine youd win gold for sure...!
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Thank you
thank you sooooooooo much
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for the shell that holds us tight keeps the inner beauty from shining through...who we are lieing so softly below...sighs...beautiful and thanks bunches for sharing
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Thank you
So much of our beauty lies beneath the surface
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The true beauty of our soul. Nice way to end a poem, on just those words! Thank you for your entry. Fantasic poem! ~Sie
Good luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words
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awww wow, gorgeous write daddy
its very beautiful. and has a nice essence to it
good luck in the contest and take care
stephanie
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Thank you
Thank you so much my sweet daughter
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