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seeing


see through the cloudy mirror of
another soul whose lies cannot
escape seduction and be a layer
of truth some day

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  • Saffron gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    I love succinct pieces with a message I am very pleased to see this here in the contest, and I thank you for writing this.

    Saffron