All that is visible,
before your eyes,
is an illusion.
Don't mistake stature
for weakness.
Beyond perception,
in the hidden depths,
there lies great power,
power capable of altering destiny.
And those that are drawn,
into ultimate deception,
will have to embrace
with an open mind,
their newfound fate.
Author notes
Prompt: Iceberg image shown on contest page.
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Hidden Depths... by Nature Song.
575 points, ended June 30, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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This is a great response to the prompt. I really like the imagery in your words. All the best luck in the contest.
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Wonderful Poem
Hello there, You have written a great take on the picture. Sometimes we don't see all that is hidden from view in some circustances and relationships. The consequences are not revealed till it it too late. That "sinking" feeling sets in.
Great poem my friend. Just my thoughts on the great picture and terrific poem.
You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Wonderful entry for this contest. One of the few that actually read all the rules! Thank you for taking the time to read them. ~Sie Good luck in the contest
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thanks for the prompt, it is a pleasure to take part.
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This is brilliant!!!
I am truly amazed by this...
It seems each time I think that you have outdone yourself, you surprise me once again...Cuz, you are so awesome...
Lynda
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