I've been locked in an eternal cage
full of hatred and rage.
every night i pray for peace
only to find no release
I have myself to blame that i became
part of the game.
I should have walked away yet
I let you stay.
Everything was fdine until i
cross that line.
Now I'm locked in an eternal cage
full of hatred and rage.
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So familiar... So sad... Maya
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not bad not bad at all full of an odd emoshonal rage i gess none the less great write great work not bad at all i realy liked it
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very beautiful!!
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How sad, but oh so beautifully written! I'd love to hope you don't really feel this way, for life is a wheel that keeps turning and with each turn it can change. I was once in a very dark place, but I kept on living and life finally pushed itself back into my path. Now I look back and am no longer afraid. You can conquer and your pen will help. Take care, special friend.
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yes this is how i feel b/c of the stuff i have done in my past and tyhe stuff that has been done to me but every day i see a little more light at the end of the tunnel thanks for taking the time out to read this very much apprerciated
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The cage may be eternal, but I believe
there's a way to break free,
for the lock has a key,
you may not even need.
Never let the cage take control
there's unbelievable power in everyones soul.
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Hey sorry it took so long for me to write back I have been kinda in a limbo with moving and stuff but thank you for the comment and i love how you put it down thanks again.
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Sad, with hatred in your heart.
But beautifully written.
Summer51
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great poem. well done, really like the way its written. xx
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