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Playing Upon our Love

I dance on the keys of melodies
that linger in your hearts music
box winding to be unleashed
as your hands caress my skin;

Falling to the beat
that collides our melting flesh
throwing clothes upon no cares
as lips glide, completing touch.

Whispers cloud my eyes

with three words speaking

of the stars that shined for me

of every trickling touch that made a wish

to remain forever imprinted on our souls.

 

You brushed against my cheek

kissing upon my neck

embracing warmth

as teeth slowly nibbled on ears

and I breached sweet sighs to your content.

 

Twisting and turning to fulfill desire

that my life's partner dreamt

of lying in an-others embrace

of were love was true.

 

Now slipping between moans

and grasping your whole

we release all, to connect

relaxing in his safe, loving grip

we rest in our home.

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  • Weltt
    July 13, 2008
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    Beautifully romantic and so softly sensual. Love this Luna!! great job.


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Beautifully expressed..Sensual and romantic...
    TY for entyering!

    Lynda


  • Tattboyspet
    June 26, 2008

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    very romantic (lol! seems you're a true romantic then huh? )
    words whispered are usually secrets (just kidding!)
    very soft here - well done!


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    'Twisting and turning to fulfill desire
    that my life's partner dreamt
    of lying in an-others embrace
    of were love was true'

    Lost in a lover's night, of heated passion. Soft melodies play...Lovely wording here in this poem. Good luck in your contest ~Sie


  • innocence jaded.xx
    June 23, 2008

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    Wowww :] This is so deep and beautiful. Very nice imagery, and this poem was just so captivating and powerful. I absolutely loved the second stanza. Amazinggg<3


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 23, 2008

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    WOW! The beginning here is truly powerful, leading on into such a beautiful sigh of 'love's' embrace... Very well crafted piece of thought and adoration. The last stanza didn't give the sort of crest I had envisioned compared to the rest, but this is truly such a lovely write!

    [[["of lying in an-others embrace
    of were love was true." -one another's?-, -where?- I know, I am evil - sowwy]]]


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    this is such a cute write and I love the words and emotions that you have chosen to use here sis well done to you


  • The Unknown Poet1
    June 23, 2008

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    *gasp* *shakes head* you are killing me my too cute for her own good daughter!!! *calls contractor to build escape-proof bedroom*


    • luna-midnight gold member
      June 23, 2008
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      i plan on it
      and hey me and that contractor have a deal

      muhahhahahaha


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 23, 2008

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    WoW Sissy this is total sighhh poetry and beautiful

    Loved

    Now slipping between moans

    and grasping your whole

    we release all, to connect

    relaxing in his safe, loving grip

    we rest in our home.


    amazing words, love to read anything from you..and great the see the background with such matching words too

    Love U

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