In exactly 2 months it'll be over...again
Left like dust on the roadside
Watching you go off
With some other guy
This guy who I thought was my friend
I bet it felt good for you
Leaving me in the way you do
"So sorry, I never meant to break your heart,
But you broke mine"
I said our love would last forever
But how did it come to this bitter end?
Shattered illusion
And broken hearts
Us now growing
Further apart
Shell, I just want to say i'm sorry
But i'm too scared to pick up the phone
Now that you are with someone else
It reminds me that I am all alone
You were my weakness
You were my strength
Both eight letters
But for us it's too late
Author notes
In exactly 2 months it'll be over...again
A contest entry
- he kissed me with glass between his teeth by Sam-I-Am.
600 points, ended July 7, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Universal feeling you've shared here. We all have been through it, we can all get over it.
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Awww, bleeding heart.
Tears that fall from a dictators mouth are not sypathised by his abused concubines.
Pretty good.
good Luck
Sam
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