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A world's lungs

                                        This is me
                                    Living this life
                                  Time and time again
                                Always running out on me
                            Without a cause to doubt another
                    To try, to finish, to save this wonderful world
                                      It’s too hard
                                      I can’t do it
                                    Life is so slow
                                      Even though
                                      I have lived
                                        A long
                                          Life.





I am the Tree of life.

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  • Sparrow
    November 13, 2008
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    I don't know how you could improve but this poem cuts right to the heart


  • sassykitty
    June 23, 2008
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    I really like the honest simplicity of this and the way you use the minimalistic style to work towards the climax. The feelings of the poetic voice are well communicated and the language perfectly encapsulates this. Thanks for sharing, it just shows we don't always have to be overly clever in order to communicate our feelings. Wish I could do that!


  • MrCrepsley
    June 23, 2008
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    Well done me!!!!!!! I love this poem