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Crimson Window

Something happend between you and i
So now im curled in a corner, and here i lie

I have done something naughty, this is true
I've opened my wrist once more, because of you

The blood flows crimson, life depletes
How could i ever go on if life repeats

The light shines bright, i can see it now
So to you, my memory i shall endow

I once was lost, but now im found
on this floor i lie, glory bound

Things could have been different, you see
But alas, the act of beating me, set you free

If that's what it took, to get your mind right
Then off i will go, on this Cold crazy night

Maybe now you will miss me, and regret your actions
But it'll be too late Dad, and no satisfactions

-- Courtesy of Stephen H Mackey.

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  • XxunBeautifulxX
    June 23, 2008
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    Very wonderful write good luck in the contest