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Where did I go right?

Can't believe,
How lucky I have been.
Right when I need somebody,
I find you!
Starts off as friendship,
Then it continues into something deeper.
I can't thank you enough for what you have done for me,
Never think you go on unwanted,
A person on the other side of the world loves you.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 28, 2008
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    Such a sweet poem of love and friendship, you have penned in this poem...I notice the Acrostic in it, as well...thank you, poet...


  • Lonely Christina
    June 23, 2008
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    who is this 4? lol thanks babe i love you too


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    June 23, 2008
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    Hi yes I can tell you this kind of poem is called an Acrostic I use them sometimes I did a Jorja Fox one and Rainbow Hallucinations Cyanide Dreams I think it's called xxx let me know if you need anything else x

  • WiltedRose0777
    June 23, 2008
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    relateable

    Beautiful...really beautiful.

  • Georgia La Mariposa
    June 23, 2008

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    This is beautiful and how most of my late relationshiops began here on AP, great take on the prompt and good luck in the contest x

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