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Beat

Every
time
I
hear
a
beat

I think of how you were still here

        and then how I acted so
               strangely to you

Even though all the promises I made
                 I never said em' right
                  I was off beat
                   I was off
                    I was..

                           a memory.

 

I wish I could take it all back

  and return it to the past

    make the better choices

     to have the better life with you

 

                                       now there doesn't seem like a way to talk to you

                                    How you locked me up inside yourself

                               To abuse me with your emotions

                           How could you put me through this?

 

             Now the only thing that lies within

              is me..

                   my soul..

                       and the beat.

                                                    

 

 

Click..                                                                          Click..

 

Click..                                         Click..        

                                                                                                            Click.. 

                            Click..

                                                                      Click..

Click..
                                                                                                       Click..
                                   Click..

 

I take it all back now..

  I know you want to see me shiver in regret..

   ..I know you want me to look like this

                      

                     Because I knew you

 

Such tantalizing eyes

What enchanting hair

So fragile, your skin

Very timid, your attitude

 

I knew that if I had just let you speak..

              This would have never happened

                      But we'll leave it at that point until you realize

 

                                         

 

                                                I still exist.

Enjoy.. ^^;;

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Comments


  • The Black Poet
    July 7, 2008

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    wow...i found this quite haunting, and very powerful.
    congratulations, keep writing, we all love it.
    ever and always,
    The Black Poet

  • PrincessBella
    June 23, 2008

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    GOOD!

    I really like the lay out. I like the ideai. The "beat"
    Can be taken from so many directions. This was good.


  • HonorablyFallen silver member
    June 23, 2008
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    Now the only thing that lies within

    is me..

    my soul..

    and the beat.

    Ah!you write on things that we have all felt .. I feel when I read this a pit in my stomach , that pit when your all alone..