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I Need To Remember

It's when the fire dies

and you look into the ashes,

that an aching loneliness

floods through your veins.

 

It's like moving from

those flaming autumn colours

into a barren winter.

 

But sitting back,

those ashes reflect

a lifetime of nights,

curled into each others frame,

the whispers of comfort

when you know

this is where you belong.

 

And as the ache pulses

with heightened intensity,

even then,

the corners of my mouth

can still see the dances

we shared in summers warmth.

 

There rests a small smile

within the deep recesses

of my mind,

but it's weighted down

with the memory of leaves,

where we strayed so long ago.

 

I have to move away,

but I can't.

The pain and the memories

are too intertwined

and the memories

are all I have left.

 

Author notes

"Turn away from the pain you don't want
Turning down to avoid them when they call
Strange words I heard a long long time ago

I wish I could back to a summer time
I knew more than twenty years ago
can't lay between the sheets
we lie underneath the maple tree now

now I can't smile

lying in the grass with the wind around us
as we smile and talk
listen to your Grandma sing those country songs
She'd tell us how the maple turns to fire
every four years
we'd lay in the grass all summer long
just to watch the autumn come around. . .

I can't smile
I can't smile

now I live alone
and your so far away
Yeah I call you every year
just around the holidays
I still see you in the night
lying above me in the grass. . .

I can't smile

turn away from the pain you don't want
Turning down to avoid them when they call
I can't believe this letter that said you died
I think I'm gonna go back to the house in North Carolina

and lay in the backyard
get drunk and let the leaves
just bury me
bury me. . .

I can't smile"

Artist: Everclear





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Comments


  • Naridill
    July 9

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    I think the last four lines didn't reflect well on the prior - the mood and flow was beautifully steady but felt interrupted at the end.

  • parenchma
    June 26
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    I got to quit drinkin. I thot I saaw a puddy tat...
  • Bob Fox
    June 23

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    Life

    Perhaps in life we need those memories to sustain hope. When love is lost{ I think } A defensive mechanism sets in. But still those memories can either haunt or help us. Another beauty from a master poet