Heavens beckon to form
that cannot quench such a desire.
Flesh screams for flight
to no avail.
For wings to come, and soul to soar;
intense, internal fire.
One day, among you all
I will prevail.
Author notes
I hope you like it!
Please leave creative comments, not just 'this is good' or 'this is bad'
Tell me what you think!
I've never tried a form as this,
does it work? Would you use it?
Does the poem suit the image?
Thanks for reading
--TheSilverQuill
Prompt = unknown: I found it through google images, as I often do.
A contest entry
- Picture Contest by BarbedWireButterfly.
1420 points, ended August 27, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, how do you like my soul??
Comments
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Dare I ask what you mean by prompt unknown? I gave you a prompt from deviant art
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An interesting write. A tad short for my liking and not really twenty lines but the information bar reads it as that so no problem. Anyway, an interesting take on the concept. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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hey there Quill....great write....seems I have some very stiff competition here...
Good luck my talented friend....
Simon
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thank you for entering
here's your picture
http://giorgiaxia.deviantart.com/art/striving-to-be-a-bird-64226257
if it doesn't help your muse then message me and I shall give you another one =D
don't forget to update your authors notes
enjoy and good luck
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