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With Bells On...

Stray, please stay and don't stray,
Play a while; make my day,
Come, Come Kitty,
Don't be afraid,

I know of your legend,
I know all of your past,
I know alot about feeding carnivorous cats,

I shall keep him,
Name him Pawz and feed him,
Treat him to fresh bully flesh(Eat them),

I will be content more;
Now that I have Pawz,
He'll bring absolute hell to the school's dinner hall,

But overall we'll be happy;
'Cos it's mine and i'm it's,
I'll be safer in school if I can keep my Kit',

"Can I keep him, please?,
Can I make him a home?",
I swear i'll make him eat you if you dare say no...

(Sorry Mum, Sorry Dad...whoops)

A contest entry

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  • louder than bombs
    July 27, 2008
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    This is cute...in a nice morbid way. Well done.


  • Arizona Sunset
    June 30, 2008

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    lol love it! I like the name Pawz best to you in the contest blessings always~ Trisha


  • Cannonsfire
    June 23, 2008

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    lol you do have the weirdest mind for some things but it reads like a ditty to sing Slan Chez


    • Domz101
      June 23, 2008
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      Ha Ha Ha... It does kinda remind me of some wierd old beats I have heard...plus, it's a bit different from my usual writing...just strange !!! LOL, Thanks Chez, much love - Domz, ONE!!!