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He who waits

Left little to the imagination,

watching the petals unfurl,

in tones of caramel,

swirls [passion] ..... waiting.

 

Secrets....

Untold to the whispers,

in gossip,

lip read... [a service ]

 

Shoo-sh his wanton lust !,

Inviting guest,

saddling ride,

Desiring  [ wanting ]

 

Scents flow in jasmine and silk,

Air alive to the music of dance,

Softly seeking,

Time [ a tease ] ... staring.

 


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Picture Prompt ( Romance Ladies Only )

A contest entry

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 30

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    This is really beautiful.. I'm really amazed by the softness of this.. You did such a wonderful job... It's sensual and soft and yet loving as well.. I really enjoyed reading this.. I think that you succeded in wooing my lover thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel

  • jcat gold member
    June 23

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    A most delicious read!!! I need a little of this spice in my life!! Very well done and best wishes


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 23

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!

    Sweet, Sensual, and very romantic, too! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this beautiful piece that I could touch, taste, feel, and smell! With legs as hot as yours - please remember to save the last dance for me, Honey!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • daviscth gold member
    June 23

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    Your words bring all sorts od delicious images to my mind sis. Another brilliant poem from you. Good luck.... Love you lots.


  • Abe 1
    June 23

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    wowza luv de heat of wanton lust
    sensual
    gd luck 2 ya babes
    abe


  • onesugar silver member
    June 23

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    Wonderfully sensual
    It's always good to leave a little to the imagination.
    Good luck with this Julie
    ~sugar~


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 23
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      yes I do love that missing link to feed peoples imagination
      Thanks hunx

  • maralisa gold member
    June 23

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    beautiful images you have painted with your words I could imagine them dance and smell the sweet smell of jasmine silk pure romance of natures shades at there best and I love the border is so pretty
    watching the petals unfurl,in tones of caramel,
    swirls [passion] ..... waiting.Scents flow in jasmine and silk,Air alive to the music of dance Softly seeking,
    Time [ a tease ] ... staring. good luck in the contest my friendxmarina

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