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A beautiful nightmare.

Beneath the fierce glares
lies nothing more than a frightened child.
And every harsh word spoken
is said with such remorse.

An innocent angel
is shattered by inner conflict.
Abandoned, broken, haunted,
yet remaining so beautiful.

Its impossible
    to win a fight against yourself.

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    July 22
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    A house divided, as they say. This is very well done.
    Congrats on the trophy.

    Garrison

  • Yes it is impossible to win a fight against yourself! THis is awesome sis!!


    xxx

  • HAha. I laughed cause I gave you the hardest word
    yet you took it...in a rush,delivered and it was amazing.
    Finalist.I reallyliked this.Well done.

    ..Simply Me♥
  • please get your entry in by tonight or i will have to DQ you
  • having fun? lol
  • collisional de-excitation
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