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Fifteen Hours To Go

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The beginning of love

 



Waiting fifteen hours
start the clock
checklist in hand
romancing the scene

Broom to hand
sweep, dust, clean
hours fly by
my focus was you

Aw love comes
in ten more hours
excitement rises
happy singing
fills my head

 



The middle of chaos

 

 


Where is my help?
seems they ran
one look at me
sweat drenched hair

Smell of cleaners
and incense
mascara under eyes
tears for you

Your voice sleepy
 only three more hours
the race is on,out of air
breath just breath



Almost over...hopeless romantic

 

 

 

Nervous i sit in the floor
looking around
is it perfect?
As good as it's gonna be

Now me, as i pass by mirrors
you would run, from what you would see
all in the name of utopianism
one more tiny hour

Dead on my feet
run to shower
mind blurry (must have be bleach overdose)
scented soap, least i smell sweeter

Make up, i got time
ouch! as i jab eyeliner in pupil
hair drying, hitting 10 minute mark
calm effect.. i did it all!

Then spring to feet
what to wear
realizing tattered robe wont do
tearing through clothes

Two minutes
its morning now am exhasted
pour a cup of coffee
sit on porch the epitome of peace



The real ending

 



You pull up
finally I can relax
giving you the hug
we been waiting for

My body betrays
my reflection of composure
legs turn to jello
shaking like a earthquake

Crying now
there goes my perfect face
I don't care
in love with you I am




I am my own loves
destructive jester











Author notes

Prompt: Tragic Comic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCgPkay1QUY


The 15 hours before my love was coming to see me...Glad he married me couldnt have done that over and over again forever!
Although my heart still flutters when he gets near me and i melt!

This is not my best work lmbo.

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  • crazymomma
    July 27

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    This reminded me of when I had to go to Dallas Tx and my man here in Indiana. I drove all the way through at 90 mph to gehome to him and it was like falling in love all over agian. Oh, the lengths we go for true love. I really liked the part about legs turn to jello. Mine do every time he takes me in his loving embrace. This has great imagery and metaphores and is so sweet and touching

  • Thank you!

    lol you never knew all that took place before YOU arrived did you lmbooo!
    Now you do wow glad all that is done but i still turn to jello everytime i look in your eyes or you touch me lol.
    What is this strange power you have my love over me?
    lol
    Whatever it is keep it!!
    I am honored and always humbled i really didnt think it was my best but i had to write it when i heard that song lol

    Love,
    ~Lisa~

  • Desire gold member
    July 27

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    I knew I had commented
    Love this!! Wahoooooooooooo
    I'd give more clappies
    but I'm limited...the nerve
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Xianaria gold member
    July 27

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    thank you for your entry! this brings such a joy to my heart, seeing the lengths a woman in love goes to in preparation for her love's arrival. a truly enjoyable read.

  • This is so true

    Oh we are envensible to what we can do when we are in love

  • J'ello

    I fell in love with the photo. How real is that!! "I am my own loves destructive jester..." It is true that we can be our own worst enemy


  • Desire gold member
    July 18
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    Precious~

    Oh My this is a Beauty and Love the Author's Comment too

    Love these lines:
    My body betrays
    my reflection of composure
    legs turn to jello
    shaking like a earthquake

    Excellent and I had to chuckle at the first line
    and then legs turning to jello

    Love it!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Humor and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

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