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Signs of The Side-Switcher

 

 

 

Feathers littered the quiet roadside.
Cars flew by like angry beams of light
disturbing the unbroken silence
in quick,
thoughtless spasms.
Your mind's eye bled crimson;
its juices
corrupting everything under its control
and in a flash of blazing headlights
you tore them from their sockets
unwincingly.
I had never seen
broken wings
looking so loveless
or a demon
seeming so pure
so I figured I'd offer you a ride back to my place
to see what you would do
for a twenty.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • ocerus
    June 23, 2008
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    I like but 'tis a trifle vague, no? But there is a lot of potential here. - oce


    • PsydewaysTears gold member
      June 23, 2008
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      it's only a small part of a journey. It's about giving up on being good.