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Looking for a Quick Fix

I was never good at sitting in neutral
If you know what I mean
When I say I'm no good at fixing people
I can only fix machines

Sweetheart, if you were only a machine
I could pull that faulty starter from your chest
Replace it with a new one
I'd give you the very best

If you were a machine
I could adjust your dimming light
Twist a little light bulb
And see that smile spark in your eyes

If you were a machine
I would have a manual to use
And not have to see your engine up on blocks
I could fix this, could fix you

I wouldn't stand here shaking
Hands coated in cold grease
I could fucking fix you
If you were a machine

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  • SerenityNChains gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    This wins kudos on the cute and clever scale, and on using the word "fucking" in a suitable way that fits! Bravo and well done on this clever lil ditty.

    Serenity