White turns black
Soul is delusional
Memory coils
Never receiving
Pleasures of death
Unending remorse
Mortality absent
Decay abundant
Solitude apparent
Void of tolerance
Echo in thought
Symbols in earth
Halo of redemption
Enchant in fearfulness
Tearlessly inadequate
An uncut mould
Untried inelegance
Unholy alliance
My god my master
Author notes
by jogn
A contest entry
- 3 MOS. Gold MEMBERSHIP-updated to 600 points! and feature, Prompt: APATHY- Give Dark Writing a Try... by ears2hearyou.
1300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow very good youre a very good poet! I like it very much. good luck in the contest my friend!
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bitter truths of ............APATHY!
clever..the anti-salvation...
we couldn't help but want you to fill in the blanks,
so we could feel the essence of the portrait you
created masterfully!
I like your entry very much!
You captured the essences of apathy with all your
senses including moral.
Well done! well done!
ears/Seattle thankyou for your entry!
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I think you've covered all the possibilities with this poem, I read it twice just to make sure I didn't miss anything, well done.
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