angel tears

angel girl why do you weep
hide your face within hands
and give into the tears

angel one don't close your eyes
so much sadness is there
i don't understand why

angel love am i worthy of grief
let the earth dry your eyes

and my love heal your heart

Author notes

earthangel33

A contest entry

Dark/sad Quickie 1...... by Angelflower. 600 points, ended June 23, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Something Different by SomethingPoetic. 375 points, ended June 27, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Angels Whispers
July 20, 2008

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beautiful

Hi
A most beautiful write you have penned here.The last line really grabbed me.... and my love heal your heart.

Such beautiful words. The opening of your poem, in the first stanza, was writen real well and drew the reader in.It has been a pleasure reading you my friend.

Take care and keep penning those wonderful thoughts of yours!Blessings to you and much love,

~Angel-anne~
nature mithya
July 5, 2008
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lovely
congrats
Puppydog
June 29, 2008
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LOVELY!!!!!
This is so peaceful and reassuring, It would uplift the lowest of hearts.
Calentice
June 25, 2008

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wow that is very beautiful I love the last stance the most especially the line let the earth dry your eyes
good luck in the contest
SomethingPoetic
June 25, 2008
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i liked this alot good job!
Darkwell
June 24, 2008
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beautiful like a best friend ^.^ WTG
Angelflower
June 23, 2008

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Awww.. I really liked this.. there was saddness and love and comfort as well.. It was really emotional.. Thank you very much for writing this and sharing this as well.. I really loved it... Best of luck..

Angel
MaMa-2-be-Cindy
June 23, 2008
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A relly touching little write here, great emotion

Hope you do well

Cin
Kari
June 23, 2008

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I really like the ending of this piece. In the fact of being there for them and showing your friendship.

Kari