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Fucked up

Dizzy
and the blood rushes to my ears
I don't quite know why I'm
messed up, fucked up

however you'd like to put it.


I don't care for all your pleading
I don't care for myself

Perhaps you'd both be better
if you left me to it,
if you left me to rot.



But you love me..
I think
And you wouldn't
leave me here.



It stings, and my limbs are heavy



I think I fucked up.

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  • stevens5613
    July 14, 2008

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    WOW i knwo i said i had a craving for more of your poetry, but its just doubled!!! this is amazing. Full of emotion.

    From the sounds of the poem, your pobviously going through a hard time, and the person probably does love you, but if there is one thing we must learn in this world, is when the bad outways the goods. You may love them and they may love you, but is all the pain your going through worth it. I had to make a decision like this a little while ago, and though i ended it, we are both better off now, ok well she is anyway XD

    Blessed be
    Chris
    XXX