I sit here alone again tonight
And with the same old love songs playing
I write
To tell the world how I feel
I let people read about the emptyness in my heart
This big hole you left me with
It hasn't always been this easy to express how I feel
When I first left I couldn't write a singel line
Now all I do is fill peoples mind
Each word in evey poem has a little more emotion than they all know
As I write the tears fall
Just like every letter that I type
But I geuss if you were sill around you would know that
I write to free the pain
Because I know you'll never read a singel word of what is said on this paper
If that were possible you would still be here
I wont waste your time or mine by sending you this
Because I know you would take one look and push it aside
That reminds me of how easily I was pushed aside
And though it kills me I had to go
I know you said it would get better and things would change
But that was your famous line
It kept me around way to many times
I knew that it was time to go our seperate ways
Im sure you knew the same
I acted like it didn't bother me
That night I looked you in the eyes and said it was time for me to go
And I remember you looking at me so very lost
And as you relized I was leaving for good
I noticed one singel tear slip from your eye
And I wanted so bad to freez time and take a picture
So that I would always have proof that you cared
But as quick as that tear came you wiped it away
And just the same you wiped me away as I walked out the door
I know you still care
I hear from people here and there
But I couldn't do it any longer
Feeling like I was your last option in everything you did was eating me alive
I had to go to better myself
Each night with you was nothing but tears because I felt that there was something else on your mind
And yet every night without you is nothing but tears
It's funny how that works
You still hurt me even when your not here
But as time goes on I get a little stronger
And each night as the love songs fade
I whisper I love you but I had to move on
Please tell me what you think
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A good piece of writing should move us, touch something in us, and you sure did that. There's a lump in my throat and tears on my cheeks. From the other comments, it's evident that you struck a common chord of human pain. Thank you for sharing that.
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Wow this brought me to tears. it was so beautiful and i relate to every line. I loved this soooo much. you will move on and it will stop hurting. lots of love
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OMG IDK WAT TO SAY TIS REALLT GETS TO ME IM GOIN THROGHT TIS RITE NOW N IT SUCK N ITS GUD TO EXPRESS UR FELLINGS OTHER TAN KEEPIN THEM INSIDE TAT HRTS MRE
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Exceptional!
Painful and beautiful words flow across this poem like tears down our cheeks. So much so many of us can relate too in what you have penned here, I still find my self whispering alone at night too, words I don't want her to hear. You have done an awesome job! Thank You for sharing, very touching.
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Write it out!
Write,write,write that's the key to a whole you. For people take a piece of us when they leave, whether it's a good thing or not. My ex took a part of me that I still haven't healed yet. And when my dad died he took a piece of me that I have worked on for years! Not everybody can deal with loss effectively, but it looks asif you are well on your way.
Congratulations on a well written catharsis.
Regards,
Degraw
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You did a wonderful job in expressing yourself and your emotions!!! There was so much emotional pain in your words... The only thing that I saw wrong with this poem, was that there were a few misspelled words.. But other then that you did wonderfully! Hope your pain eases..
Angel
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such a awsome piece three cheers
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Beautiful
This poem is beautiful and sad at the same time. I can relate to this a lot and I really loved it. Even if it hurts now you made the right choice and it will get better. Keep up the amazing work!
~Kayla~
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"You still hurt me even when your not here But as time goes on I get a little stronger And each night as the love songs fade I whisper I love you but I had to move on"
what a sense of relief these emotions must bring to your soul. wouldn't it be wonderful if ever broken heart could find this peace. this is well written. thank you for sharing it with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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wow. i can't even tell you how much i feel like this poem should have been meant for me. awesome write. you are truly an amazing poet. i can't wait to read more of your work. keep up the amazing writing.
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great write i remember feeling this so many times but i never stuck to it i kept going back and he kept breaking my heart until finally someone better walked into my life and now i stand here on solid ground standing up for what is write this was a great write you can tell there is so much emotions here. I feel sorry for that guy! keep on penning my dear.
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bravo
A dark and despairing piece, no question...very deftly done lover's lament (old as the world itself!) Unfortunately, enitely too many of us can easily identify with the feelings poured out, like a never lapsing flood, in this fine poem... bravo... bravo.. bravo... -
beautiful...sometimes that's the decision we have to make. you deserve the best, and if you're not feeling that in the relationship, you need to move on. it hurts at the beginning...but it will get better. stay strong hun...this is a heartfelt write =) great work!
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Sounds like you made the right decision. Make a mental note 'no time wasters please!' life is too precious.
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