If I fall will you catch me?
If I hide will you find me?
If I need you will you be there?
If I don't need you, will you be there anyway?
If I fall apart will you put me back together?
Its not these questions i want answered.
All I want to know is,
Will you love me for the rest of you life,
Or will you turn your back like all the others?
Author notes
option 3
A contest entry
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Comments
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NO!!
No turning of the back. This is very emotional. Straight up asking the dear questions we should all ask before starting a relationship. Though, i'm afraid they'd lie anyway. =\
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest. -
I enjoyed the repetitive questions used in this. These are all things we can never know until we take a chance on love. Thanks for entering and good luck
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I also enjoyed the questions that you asked in your write. It's something that I can relate to very well. Love does all of these and more for a person. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Wow,
I love the questions in this poem. They are questions everyone really wants answers to. And I love the twists, about how none of the other questions matter. Just as long as you'll be there and love me, when no one else will. Truly amazing. Great work!
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