6 months passed without a word...
and now here you stand...
wanting me all over again...
should I fall back to the past...
or leave you be just that?
If only my heart could decide...
I sit listening to love songs..
and remember being with you...
and I'm taking the fall again...
even though you've wrecked me...
I'm still so willing to jump...
please catch me this time...
Don't leave me alone again...
I don't wanna be alone.
Even after all I've done...
I don't deserve the pain...
let this be it for me.
I chose the dimmest star
and made a wish on it...
it was fading just like me.
And brought me back to life.
With just a hello and apology.
Wish me luck in this betrayal.
Author notes
my ex talked to me....for the first time in six months...it scares me...and excites me...but this could mean alot of things...the end of me...I don't know what to do...or how to handle it honestly...I keep hoping that this time will be different...will it be? Or will I be pulled under the waves again...and become colder than I am now.
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It's so emotional <3 I love it. ^^ I love this part...
"I chose the dimmest star
and made a wish on it...
it was fading just like me.
And brought me back to life."
If i had applauds I would D: -
Such emtion in this piece and honest aswell...almost as if I can see you sitting listening to these love songs and trying o make your decision. I really hope that he didn't hurt you again but I think I know how it all turned out...seeing as how you are now mine.
I really enjoy your poetry Holly...you put a piece of yourself into each piece and it seems so genuine.
love ya
-Dustin-
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I really love this Holly, especially in the author notes, that line...
Or will I be pulled under the waves again...and become colder than I am now.
That's amazing and it's not even in the poem! Love is a very dangerous game of trust. Be careful my lovely. -
This is an excellent piece of writing DgD.
It makes one wonder...what would I do if my past came back...would I take hold of it and embrace it, or leave it laying the in the remnants of yesterday where it belongs.... I know which I chose
Superb penmanship Eggeh!
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Very Gewd =]
I love this poem...I really can relate to it...I found out that my ex never got over me and so thats all in my mind lately.
It is very well written and i like how you phrase things.
A job well done
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Love tames all.this poem express what many people are doing, and not admitting to. Good job
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Nick?
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no actually.....an ex of mine named eric...
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definetly agree with the last person, from personal experience if they hurt you once they will do it again, great poem full of emotion and best wishes in life
Your friend Lucian"
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I know better.
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To many times someone has put their faith in someone that doesnt deserve it. You take the leap expecting that person to catch you but they never do. So you pick yourself up and move on but then back around that come wanting you to jump. Its a vicious circle that usually ends up with one person broken over and over but each time they jump hoping this time it will be different. I'm just learning in my own life its better to just walk away. Great poem
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Thanks for the comment.
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