I will be here till the end
with love and care
I know you'll follow my trend
Sometime somewhere
Author notes
Yeah i have read them
A contest entry
- 4000 thousand point contest! AP #1 2008 Slam: Sign Up Page Contest 2000 (THOUSAND POINTS NOT 300, PROMISE!)(pot has doubled people 4000 points)(POT HAS NOW TRIPLED PEOPLE!! 6,000 POINTS!!! by duana.
300 points, ended July 21, 2008, 27 entries
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I know you'll follow my trend Sometime somewhere wonderful ready for the slam then
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this is just great. really good idea for an entry, good luck! -Jamie
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another short and sweet one I love your work
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Yeah man you are the trend setter, by writing an unique poem you have already made it.
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yeah a short but powerful
i like the meaning and imaginary
really great
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This is quite a short poem that you have written here, but it definately radiates a crystal clear message to the one you have written this for.
I wich you all the best in the contest!
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Lol.. this was interesting.. I liked the flow and rhyme... And the imagery was interesting for sure.. Lol. Best of luck with this contest!! lol.
Angel
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What a lovely short write..powerful piece for few words..best of luck my friend
Ruby
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