Love can be a joyous, joyous thing,
love can heal, love can sooth, love can
gather all the most positive feelings
together in one room.
Love is wonderful, love is pure,
love is the canary singing on the
window ledge, the whisper of
the wind on a summer day.
Ours is a bubblegum love-
it is pink and sweet and pure.
It is light and fluffy and
tastes like a dream.
Our love is a dream, a fantasyland
of sorts, where the faery folks and
woodland animals gather for tea parties,
and this is a celebration of our love, our happy love.
Author notes
Prompt one. A poem on pure love nothing negative
A contest entry
- Gimme some luv by unavailable.
600 points, ended September 18, 2008, 51 entries
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I like the 2nd stanza but the rest is kind of....not very good....sorry.
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I don't like it- It was really cliché. Like, really. But if I had to choose an interesting stanza- it would be the last one, only because I'm a sucker when it comes to faeries. Great job in managing a very boring write!
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Thanks man
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Well, bubblegum love sums it up.
I like DEEP!
Want to enter again? Or no? -
Oh this is so precious, thank you so much for sharing this poem.
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sweet :D
It's all so sweet and happy! i think ur second stanza is the strongest.. and the second last is my favorite... it's cute! anwyays.. good job!
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