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Searching Strength

I walk the sacred circle
laid long ago with handpicked stone.
Prayers from parched lips call
searching strength to atone.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    June 23, 2008

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    A beautifully penned piece of spiritual awareness, and coursing stem of inner faith. Very well crafted wrte! Best wishes in the contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    A fabulous take on the prompt, very creatively done. Superb imagery within such few words. All the best in the contest with it


  • Megan Awesome
    June 22, 2008

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    Interesting ... could you explain it a little to me so I can understand it a littl ebetter? Good luck in the contest!!!
    Megan