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(Option 1)This beautiful but ugly girl

This girl, Dancing, laughing, giggling and smiling. All seems great on the outside but oh so bad on the inside. Her clothing revealing,Her facial "paintings" oh so disgusting. This Beautiful figure, this beautiful girl feels so ugly inside. Hiding her pain with the Dancing and playing. Her light dissapearing behind that fake barby doll face and fake character of hers.  But she smiles and continues to play her games of hide and seek with the others around her.

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  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 22, 2008
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    Cute

    That's a very beautiful description ..depiction of the picture. I Have thouroughly enjoyed this. Though it's written in a very different "form" than i'm used to. It's still very well written. Great job && Good luck in my contest.

    "Her facial "paintings" oh so disgusting"

    AMAZING


  • Cptn Puddlez
    June 22, 2008
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    Eh...