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~[]~Liar~[]~

You are a pitiful liar,
Lieing to my face,
You broke my heart,
Tore it right out of my chest,
How far did you think you'd get?
Running around lieing to me,
Liar, Liar, Liar,
You are pitiful,
You may have won the battle,
But the war is not over,
I hate you Liar,
Where will you go now?
I am gone now,
And I'm not forgiving this time...

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  • YoureNoGoodForMe gold member
    June 23

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    Wow. Just wow. Haha I know EXACTLY how this is. I used to know this guy who used to lie to my face all the time too. I know how it feels to be lied to, that's for sure. Every line in this poem brings me back two years, which was an awful summer. Ughhh. Perfect poem for how I felt. Sorry haah I'm rambling

    "Where will you go now?
    I am gone now,
    And I'm not forgiving this time..."

    Loved the ending to this poem. Especially the last line. Incredible ! <3


  • xxkeepxxbleedingxx
    June 22

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    Wow.

    Its got such a powerful meaning.

    I have delt with plenty of liars.

    Thats why i have lost trust with most people.

    Keep up the good writing.




    ♥ christina