Come on, take the journey
you, me and all, take the step
no matter time or distance
all irrelevant,
for a broken spirit with crystal eyes has the longest journey
is at the front door to open it
Reach out, give, take,
challenge the road, the journey calls
inside out, outside in, Purple trails,
open your soul, your heart, your memories
let it be the bridge, from reality to fantasy.
to cross the water, reaching your near end.
Fly with the wings of your telepathic thought
Let your imagination over take you, (Paulo, Pepsi, Jiggles and Jews. SKIES THE LIMIT)
feel with the wisdom of yesterday
bury the sorrow, make place for the new
rejoice in what will come and dare
give way, don't let anything frighten you
just make the journey of the heart,
The journey that makes us sixteen.
Author notes
I LIKE BUTTER! Song: Drive my soul by lights
I picked the song because it sounds cool, and something that has to do with, like a journey through life, which my poem is based on lol. Its not my best work, but its cool.
A contest entry
- whootness!! Options!! =D by Technicolor.
300 points, ended July 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LMFAO I shall fix it oh great master!
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(Paulo, Pepsi, Jiggles. SKIES THE LIMIT)
Nice.. LOL. NO JEW?! xD.
I'm amazed Jessica didn't yell at you a ba-gillion times for saying "don't let nothing frighten you". LOL. A little fix there?
I like the last bit.. 'Specially the line "feel with the wisdom of yesterday". =] Makes me think of Paulo as this supremely knowledgeable person. He probably is, but I mean, you can't talk about politics in Zimbabwe, when all your thinking is 'Don't touch the package.. Don't do it...' LOL.
I like poem. =]
Fankies for entering! -
for a broken spirit with crystal eyes
Groovy line...although crystal eyes in real life would be the ultimate creep-out!!
(Paulo, Pepsi, Jiggles. SKIES THE LIMIT)
Is this an anecdote or a story? LMAO
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