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Rough Draft, nowhere else to put it sorry!

From the moment I first saw you
From the moment I saw those eyes so blue
I knew, I knew

There was no one else in the room
I felt I was falling into you
Adn then you noticed me
my legs unsteady
my heart was racing

walk with me until we both float away
cry with me and see us into the day
I can't stand waiting
I'm sorry I let you go
Walk with me

We talked it over
We talked a little bit but
Nothing really would do for me
I was just tired of wating

walk with me until we both float away
cry with me and see us into the day
I can't stand waiting
I'm sorry I let you go
Walk with me

I pushed you out
I closed the door
I never thought I'd want it back
But somehow I never broke the finale chain

hey just a draft!

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