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Nocturnal Passion

 

 

 

 

You stir, as I draw near

with hungry lips

that find their way

in the dark.

 

Your warm body writhes

as I touch it softly,

even in deep sleep,

you are easily aroused.

 

Sliding along your form, I stop

briefly, to sniff, like a snake

traversing a palm tree,

overtaken by wild jasmine.

 

And somewhere, amid dreams with

waking sighs of pleasure, we both find

our reward, only to drift back

into peaceful slumber.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Dedicated to my wife.

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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    July 24, 2008

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    *happy glow* I love how you've taken easy familiarity and passion and woven them together in this tasty little poem...I bet she blushed when she read this and loved you all the more for its romantic truth...


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    i knew you would find the poetry...
    Love, Lane


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    Beautiful, sensual, passionate.. all those things and more! A wonderful piece that your wife with adore!!


  • Brazos silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    A wonderful, passionate tribute to your wife, very nicely done. Flowed like a dream come true.

    Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.

    Novy & Brazos


  • PurringKitten silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    your words flow like silk and pulls a little sigh from deep within...the tenderness of a love so complete...thank you for sharing with me

    may i have my breath back now


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    As usual, you awaken sense with your words, not only sight and touch but also smell. This is such a lovely dedication MJ. Juls


  • Amera gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Oh my, she will love this! Sensious imagery and passionate feelings. Good boy!


    Love,
    Amera


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Only to drift back into a peaceful slumber. For love is true when two are one! ~Lovely titile for your poem! Great write...and with such a flare, that only your pen can do! ~Sie


  • BellaD
    June 23, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    A lovely poem for your wife...lucky woman.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    You answered the call of the contest very well dear with some wonderful images coming out of your words.

    Best of luck.

    Love Margaret

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