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What are you about

I call you near, you walk in a haste
The nearer you get, you're more eager for a taste

As you pull me in, I feel such lust
With your body so so close, I know its a must

You pull off my blouse, my body starts to shake
As you lay my body down, you know its for you to take

As I kiss your neck, I feel your mind get bigger
As I bite your neck, your legs start to shiver

My pant come off slow, as you stop for your taste
As I start to squirm, you tightly grab my waist

You thrust yourself inside me, and I feel your heartbeat inside
Im so caught up in the moment, I flip you over for a ride

You put me in a position, I have never been before
And I dont put up a fight when you throw me on the floor

I start to feel this pleasure, its so hard not to scream
My blood starts racing through my body, like a violent stream

I need to let go, so I yell and let it out
I knew from that moment what you were all about

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  • WingedWolf
    June 30, 2008

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    nice! "i knew from that moment what you were all about" love that line. you definitely found yourself a pleasurable man, it seems hee hee.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    I love it