Like day to night,
What is made from feelings in my chest?
Built to destroy it’s maker, it burns on.
And still I sit and watch the chaos that results from
... finally happy.
And death to my past. Let the future exist tenfold!
He wanted the most but never expected to get anything more than
You never know.
Or
Baby let go.
And did I know what’s best or is example wrong?
Did he stay inspired or did he sing a different song?
Did he do or does he don’t
or does he will or will she won’t?
It’s easy to let go of life when life starts to work.
But try to just stay...
David Bauser
“Like Day To Night”
Dec. 2007
A contest entry
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I love the flow!
And did I know what’s best or is example wrong?
Did he stay inspired or did he sing a different song?
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this is a great poem I love the imagery and you did such a great job expressing these feelings.
thank you for your entry!
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wow this is very good. I love all of it. beautiful write :]
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i like this poem a lot.
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great..
i like this alot. its written alot differently. this is so very well written and worded so great. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
Yes you have painted the philosphy of this life so beautifully..a great job indeed my friend...well done...
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thank you!
thank you very much. i really like this one and i don't like most of what i write. it was a growing point of my life when this one came out.
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