Jesus sees the pope surrounded by a crowd
everyone is clapping thier hands
and cheering from the stands
and Jesus is very proud.
He remembers the virgin Mary when she appeared
people came from everywhere to a town
and her presence was not feared
They prayed the rosary and no one had a frown.
Jesus remembered when people waved thier branches of palm
and cheered for him.
when he spoke everyone was calm
and listened to him.
Jesus sees the pope in the United States
April fifteen through twenty
the pope say mass in a stadium , People feel time was not a waste.
People had many feelings which were plenty.
Jesus wants to be in the world again after watching the pope
He feels when he comes to everyone
They will bow thier head and fold thier hands in prayer
Jesus will go everywhere
and be treated like the the pope in many places not one.
Jesus is filled with hope.
A contest entry
- PHOTO PROMPT!!! WHAT DOES JESUS SEE???? by Talking Toni.
550 points, ended July 8, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very well penned. One thing for the last 4 stanzas you loose your original form and rhyme scheme, that should be fixeed.
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I Bet You.......
are right that Jesus wants the world to get excited about his return and start turning their eyes off of this world and towards him!!! Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~
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