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Blue gray eyes

starring out at the dark, blue ~ gray sky
storm clouds begin rolling by
i realized they are the color of my eyes
not a beautiful sunny blue sky
mine are intense stormy blue
my life feeling so much gloom
blue ~ gray storm clouds rolling in
sometimes bringing damage deep within
in the distance , in a glance
an occasional rainbow to marvel at

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grieving the loss of my brother

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  • heygoo
    August 5, 2008

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    I am so sorry for your loss, Hon. I've not been around in a while. This tender moment you have shared with me reminds me of why I need to return here more often. Hold on to the rainbows.


    • voicekp
      August 7, 2008
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      thank you for your comment. sorrow and happiness both bring me back to poetry. i don't visit the site enough. i always enjoy your poetry when i read it. thanks so much!